Hey Brandon, Nice job on the video. You had a good sales pitch, and I think you did a good job playing the part as the salesman and how you pretended that you actually had the piece that you were selling there with you. I like how you had your speech memorized and how you scanned the room as if you were really speaking with room of potential investors. I think the product idea is very interesting as well, and I would be interested to see how the product worked. -Dakota Horlocker
Good job on your elevator pitch. I especially liked your example about the amount of time it takes to mow a soccer field. I think those numbers would be particularly helpful when pitching the product to investors to help sell the product. The idea of using statistics is something that I could incorporate into my pitch to make it stronger. You might consider moving your camera angle a little higher next time. Overall, nice job!
Hi Brandon. Your elevator pitch had good and not-so-good aspects. Great idea, varying the size of the mower with the size of the job! Your mention of real-world time to complete tasks was a good inclusion. You were nervous, (I was too!), but I think that gets better with practice. Your camera angle was low; it would have been better if the camera focus was directly on you instead of upward. Also, look into the camera more! You were looking into a lot of different spots, rather than directly at the camera. The camera serves as the investor you are speaking to in this case, so look directly at them and make eye contact, so to speak. I’m not quite sure what you were asking the investors to do at the end. You might want to include directly asking them for the next meeting in your next elevator pitch. All in all, not bad- remember, practice makes perfect!
Hey Brandon,
ReplyDeleteNice job on the video. You had a good sales pitch, and I think you did a good job playing the part as the salesman and how you pretended that you actually had the piece that you were selling there with you. I like how you had your speech memorized and how you scanned the room as if you were really speaking with room of potential investors. I think the product idea is very interesting as well, and I would be interested to see how the product worked.
-Dakota Horlocker
Hi Brandon,
ReplyDeleteGood job on your elevator pitch. I especially liked your example about the amount of time it takes to mow a soccer field. I think those numbers would be particularly helpful when pitching the product to investors to help sell the product. The idea of using statistics is something that I could incorporate into my pitch to make it stronger. You might consider moving your camera angle a little higher next time. Overall, nice job!
Ashley Decker
Hi Brandon.
ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitch had good and not-so-good aspects. Great idea, varying the size of the mower with the size of the job! Your mention of real-world time to complete tasks was a good inclusion.
You were nervous, (I was too!), but I think that gets better with practice. Your camera angle was low; it would have been better if the camera focus was directly on you instead of upward. Also, look into the camera more! You were looking into a lot of different spots, rather than directly at the camera. The camera serves as the investor you are speaking to in this case, so look directly at them and make eye contact, so to speak.
I’m not quite sure what you were asking the investors to do at the end. You might want to include directly asking them for the next meeting in your next elevator pitch.
All in all, not bad- remember, practice makes perfect!