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One of the things I changed is trying to make more pronounced
gestures and focusing on being clear in describing my idea. I tried to talk a
little slower and make it seem like I was less nervous, I know that if I actually
gave this pitch to real investors that would add a lot of pressure, so I should
be able to do the pitch in front of a camera and not be nervous at all. I also feel
like I have the pitch pretty much memorized, while I don’t know every single
word I pretty much have the main topics that I want to hit, and I know what I
will do to promote my product.
Your elevator pitch has definitely been improving every time I see it. You seem much more comfortable in front of the camera now and are swaying less (which is often a key indicator of nerves). It seems like you got a lot of good feedback on your last pitch and really incorporated that advice into the final pitch so nicely done.
ReplyDeleteHi Brandon.
ReplyDeleteNice job! You have been improving every time. This time, you were steadier and less nervous. You looked right into the camera. You had your pitch mostly memorized. You had good gestures.
You are enthusiastic about your idea and it shows.
For future improvement, you might consider some type of graphic, and working away the last of your nervousness. You might try moving around a little more instead of standing still.
But overall, good job! (Aren’t you glad this is the last one of these we have to do this semester?)